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~TFA Jetfire & Temptation~

~Forbidden Love, Part 1~  

(Rated: PG-13)


"What could he be doing~?" Jetstorm wondered as he lay huddled on his berth that night. During their stay on Earth, upon their ship Steel Haven, he and his twin brother, Jetfire slept in the same room on separate berths. But tonight, Jetstorm was alone and Jefire's berth was empty.
The young blue mech of storms knew where his brother was, but he wouldn't dare to slip a word out to anyone. He promised he wouldn't. Not even their commander, the proud Sentinel Prime.
Jetstorm tossed and turned a few times, his mind filled with worry. He will never forget that fateful day where he and Jetfire were separated during a 'Con investigation through the woods, near Detroit. And that was when Jetfire stumbled onto the sleek but deadly Predacon cobra; Temptation. True to her name, this seductive red scaled femme has had her optic on the young orange mech ever since.
And to Jetstorm's surprise, Jetfire liked her back. This is what he found out when they both escaped from the Predacon's lair and blue twin vowed to keep this only between him and his brother. Although he was thankful that Jetfire wasn't harmed that day, Jetstorm still worried for him, piecing together on how his brother came to admire such a creature like Temptation.
Did she bewitch him~? Cast a spell~? She was known mostly for her hypnotic powers but Jetstorm wasn't so sure. And he also noticed marks appearing on Jetfire's neck. Fang marks. They seemed to appear every time his brother crept out to see Temptation at night, but would always return in the early hours of the morning. Jetstorm sighed. This was the fourth time this week that Jetfire had sneaked out against Elite rules, and Jetstorm was praying to Primus that Sentinel doesn't find out sooner than he thinks.
There was only one thing for it. "I'll just have to be sneaking out and finding out myself," Jetstorm thought to himself, "I have to know if my brother is being alright~!" So accessing the code, Jetstorm slipped away and took off in his alt mode, towards the woods.

At that very same moment, Jetfire had made his way to Temptation's lair. A warm cave located at the end of the woods near a small waterfall. He knew it off by spark, let alone her energy signature.
From the moment they met, the young mech of fire had been thinking about Temptation all day and all of yesterday, and the day before that…in fact, he hadn't stopped thinking about her. His beautiful and luscious Temptation, with her pearly white fangs and soft tender lips, complete with a slender body and tail.
Sure, he was timid at first when she brought him back to her cave, but once he got to know her and listened to her hypnotic voice, she wasn't as dangerous as he thought.
However, this made him quite distracted from training, yet alone his twin brother concerned and Sentinel annoyed. Clutching a small box in his servo, Jetfire smiled as he reached the entrance of the cave and cautiously peeked inside.
"Miss. Temptation~? Are you being in here~?" His smile grew as he heard a familiar soft hiss and a curled figure stirred gently. Its head rose from its slumber and turned to face Jetfire. It was Temptation herself but in her beast form, a scarlet red king cobra.
"Fire Boy~" she beamed in delight, "ssso lovely of you to sssee me again." The Predacon femme hissed more softly as she nuzzled her head against the junior Elite's. Oh, how she adored him. Temptation had never met such a handsome bot before. Of course, there were older bots that were quite good looking too, but Jetfire was something special. Temptation would do anything for him and he would do anything for her, so her love for him was not wasted.
The young Elite Guard's spark rate quickened as the snake transformed into her sleek bot mode.
"I-I have brought a present," Jetfire spoke shyly, taking out the yellow box from under his arm.
"A presssent for me~?" Temptation asked, "Ooh how sssweet of you Fire Boy, what issss it~?"
"It is being your favourite," the young jet replied, opening the box to reveal a set of energon candy shapes with little tails, "Energon sugar mice."

"Awww Jetfire, thank-you," the snake lady replied, "how did you know~?" Jetfire chuckled with a wink.
"I have to be knowing everything about you if we are to be together…my mistress," he whispered as they settled down on the double berth. The young Elite then fed Temptation one of the sugar mice and she ate it gratefully.
"Hmmm deliciousss, thank-you again Fire Boy. You are ssso good to me."
Jetfire blushed deeply as his mistress rested her helm on his shoulder plate. He had only known her for a few months but he knew it was fate. He had to make her his. As the two of them went out to watch the stars, the orange jet glanced over at Temptation, his faceplate going red again. He swallowed hard and then took hold of her servos.
"M-Miss. Temptation…I-I've know we've been knowing each other for a short time now…but I am believing that you are the one and you is also inspiring me to be…a better bot…~" And before Temptation knew it, Jetfire had gone down on one knee, still gazing into her optics.
"S-So, Temptation…my mistress, will you be doing me the honour...in becoming my bondmate~?" The Predacon femme's optics widened as if her spark had stopped, and she blushed as red as her armour.
"Fire Boy…Jetfire…y-you really mean that~?"
"Yes, I am meaning it. You is the one I want to be sharing my life with…I've never felt strongly about any bot before. I am loving you so…~" Temptation's optics quivered in the moonlight as she felt her spark being deeply touched. It didn't even take long to make up her mind.
"Oooh Jetfire…yes, I will~! I love you too." The young jet could not believe his delight. "Really~?! Oooh Miss. Temptation, thanking you, thanking you, THANKING YOU~!!" The two lovers then embraced as Temptation playfully nibbled Jetfire on the neck, which tickled him. But while they shared a sweet tender kiss, a certain blue jet was hiding behind a nearby tree. Jetstorm had witnessed everything.

"Brother…what you be doing~??" he muttered worriedly but bit loud enough to be heard. As he watched his twin slip back into the cave with his bondmate to be, many questions rushed around in his Jetstorm's mind. Should he tell Sentinel~? No, he made a promise to Jetfire. Maybe he could pretend this whole thing never happened. Sentinel will never know. As long as he doesn't say anything at all, Jetstorm will stay in one piece.
The next day, Jetfire had returned to the ship at dawn, and was now refreshing himself.
"Yo Jetfire~!" called Jazz, "time to come out little dude. You've been in there all morning." The orange mech eventually came out, daydreaming and singing to himself.
"What's with him lately~?" Jazz wondered as he watched the love struck jet float around the room, holding an energon flower close to his spark. Just then Sentinel entered the room.
"Oh, morning Sentinel Prime sir~!" chirped Jetfire, attaching the flower to Sentinel's helm.
"Err...good morning," replied Sentinel, a bit baffled as he too watched Jetfire float out of the room, still singing merrily.
"Maaan…he's got it bad," smirked Jazz, raising his visor.
"What~? What's he got~?" Sentinel demanded.
"Isn't it obvious S.P.~?" the music loving Elite Guard told him, "Jetfire's in love…~" That made the big chinned commander even more baffled as he took the flower off his helm.
"Jetfire~? In love~??"
Meanwhile, Jetstorm was pacing the floor about what he had seen last night. "Okay…it's being so far, so good…I do not think Sentinel Prime sir knows…ooh but I do not know how I can be keeping this secret for long~!"
Jetfire however, was tracing Temptation's name as he lay upon his berth, when he got a call on his frequency.
"Hello~? Jetfire~?" It was Temptation herself. The orange jet picked up the call instantly, but he had to be quiet.
"Ah Mistress, hello. Is everything being alright~?"
"Jusssst fine darling. Come to my cave quickly, I have a sssurprise for you." Jetfire's optics widened a little.
"A surprise~? For me~? Oh of course Tempty love, I is on my way~!" Ending the call, the orange mech turned and looked at his brother, still pondering in his thoughts. Luckily the call wasn't heard. Jetfire then turned back and slipped away out of the ship.
"Jetfire~?" Jetstorm peeked out, seeing his twin take off in his alt mode. "Oooh…someone has got to be nailing my brother's servos to the floor…~" Just then Jazz called in.
"JETSTORM~!! Ah Jetstorm dude, there you are. I've got an instant message from S.P."
"Sentinel Prime sir~?" the blue jet asked. Jazz nodded.
"He wants to see you right away. Something about Jetfire." Jetstorm froze as a huge gasp came from his vocalizer.
"…He knows~!"

Sentinel sat in his office, looking at the energon flower Jetfire had given him. He chuckled himself.
"Hahaha…Jetfire in love, eh~?" He then sighed, "who could that lucky femme bot be~?" Sentinel then paused as he saw Jetstorm peeking through the doorway. He cleared his vocalizer and put the flower down.
"Ahem…ah…come in, Jetstorm." The young mech took a deep breath.
"I must not over react," he told himself, "I must be remaining calm." He then entered the office as calm as he could.
"…Yes~?" he squeaked, before quickly too clearing his vocalizer, "yes Sentinel Prime sir~?"
"Jetstorm," Sentinel began, "I'm concerned about your brother. Have you noticed he's been acting peculiar lately~?"
"Err…peculiar~?" asked Jetstorm.
"Jetfire floating about…~" Sentinel went on, "Daydreaming. Singing to himself…you haven't noticed~?"
"Erm…~" the blue jet was stuck.
"Jetstorm…~" Sentinel smirked, beckoning him closer, "I know you've been keeping something for me…~"
"K-Keeping…something sir~?" Jetstorm swallowed, tugging a little at his collar.
"About Jetfire…~" The young mech's knee joints were shaking right now and he had to control them. "…Jefire~?"
"In love…~" Sentinel grinned widely, close to his face plate. That was it. Jetstorm couldn't take anymore.
"…I WANTED TO BE STOPPING HIM~!! BUT I JUST COULD NOT~!! I wanted him to beware of that snake lady~! He may not know she could be trouble~!"
"…Snake lady~?" Sentinel's smile changed to a complete frown. "WHAT SNAKE LADY~?!" he bellowed. Jetstorm froze once more. He realized what he just said.
"…Snake lady~?" he repeated, followed by a nervous laugh, "w-who said anything about a snake lady~? Hehehe…EEP~!!" But Sentinel wasn't having any of it as he suddenly grabbed Jetstorm by the shoulder plates…~

Meanwhile, Jetfire had met up with Temptation once more as they made their to her cave.
"Tempty, what was the surprise you going to tell me~? I is feeling excited." The Predacon femme smiled warmly. It seemed to Jetfire, she was glowing a lot. Temptation then spoke.
"Darling…remember I taught how to interface and you sssoon learnt quickly~?" Jetfire blushed, shuffling his feet.
"O-Oooh yes…I am remembering…being most magical moment of my life…what about it~?" Temptation's smile grew as she placed a servo on her tummy.
"Well…looksss like I'm not the only one who will be sssharing your life…~" she whispered, then paused, "Jetfire…I'm pregnant…~" The orange's jet's faceplate heated up so much, flames nearly lit up on his helm. He then blinked twice.
"…What~? You is what~?"
"Pregnant," the snake lady repeated, "I'm pregnant. We're going to have a sssparkling of our own." Jetfire's jaw dropped open and nearly fell back as if his spark had stopped altogether.
"Oooh Tempty…this…this is being wonderful~! Ooh Tempty, you is the best~! I am loving you~!"
"I love you too. I couldn't believe it~!" Jetfire took his beloved mistress into his arms, showering her with kisses.
"You know, I've been wondering what it is like to be father. Now we can be like, proper family." But just as Jetfire spun Temptation round in his arms, both laughing with delight…to his horror…there was Sentinel, standing right before them in the shadows. The orange jet gasped. "Sentinel Prime sir~!"
To make matters worse, he also saw Jetstorm peering behind their commander. Jetfire was most surprised. His own brother had promised he wouldn't tell. As the orange jet held Temptation close behind him, Sentinel narrowed his optics.
"I thought I'd made myself a reasonable mech," he snarled, appearing out of the shadows, "We made certain rules~! And I EXPECT those rules to be obeyed~!"
Holding back his fear, Jetfire tried to speak up. "But Sentinel Prime sir~!"
"Is it true, you formed a relationship with a Predacon~?!"
"Sentinel Prime sir, I can be explaining…~"
"That kind of connection between any type of Autobots and Decepticons is FORBIDDEN~!! Jetfire, you KNOW that~! Every bot knows that~!"
"But she never harmed me~!"
"That makes no difference~!" That stung Jetfire as he too frowned.
"…You do not even know her…~"
"Know her~?!" Sentinel barked, "I don't have to know her~! They're all the same~! Disgusting mutant freaks~! And it's clear to see what this one's been up to, I can smell the poison from the marks on your neck~!"
"SENTINEL PRIME SIR, I LOVE HER~!! WE ARE HAVING SPARKLING TOGETHER~!!" the young mech burst out loud enough for all of Detroit to hear. Jetstorm winced behind his visor. Sentinel could not believe his audio receptors.

"…No…have you lost your fraggin' mind completely~?! She's a Predacon~! YOU'RE AN ELITE GUARD~!!"
"I do not care…~" Jetfire replied firmly, holding Temptation close to his chest plate.
"Then so help me Jetfire. I am going to get through to you," Sentinel glared, taking out his shield and lance, "And if this is the only way~? SO BE IT~!" He lunged forward to attack the Predacon femme.
"NO~!!" cried Jetfire, "Sentinel Prime sir, STOP~!! PLEASE STOP~!!" But the big Elite Guard didn't listen. As he managed to trip Temptation up, he attempted to pierce her with his lance but was hit with a huge flame thrower. Managing to dodge some of it with his shield, Sentinel looked up and saw Jetfire alight with fury in his flames.
"Aaagh…JETFIRE~!! What is the meaning of this~?!"
"I am being serious Sentinel Prime sir…~" the orange jet stated clearly, joining his lover's side once more, "if you are wanting to hurt Temptation, you will have to be going through me…~"
"Threatening your own commander~?! THAT'S MUTANTY~!!" Temptation then hissed loudly in loudly in her beast mode, causing Sentinel to yelp in fright. "Easy my love," Jetfire whispered to her, stroking her head which calmed her instantly. Jetstorm wondered if his brother had become an actual snake whisperer.
"And you is having no right to harm my future bondmate and sparkling…~" Hearing his statement, Sentinel nearly bit his glossa but had to admit defeat in fighting.
"Grrr…very well Jetfire. If that's how you wish to end this, fine. We'll just have to see what the council has to say." He then turned to Jetstorm.
"Jetstorm, cuff her~!" he barked before exiting the scene. The blue jet obeyed, taking out a pair of status cuffs. Temptation let him cuff her while Jetfire stroked her belly.
"Jetfire, I…~" Jetstorm tried to say.
"Don't…~" came the blunt reply, "Just don't…we'll be talking later…~" So Jetstorm didn't finish. He sighed, feeling a weight of guilt on his spark as he led his twin and lover towards Steel Haven. Temptation and their sparkling was all that mattered now, and any harm coming to them was the last thing Jetfire wanted. He just hoped the council can lighten the situation…~


~To Be Continued…~
(Rated: PG-13)

Hey guys, it's fanfic time again~! 8DD :la: Now, you've all heard and read the love story of TFA Bumblebee and Jadebutterfly, so it's time to move on to a story of two bots who saw passed each other's differences and fell deeply in love. But they were torn by their alliances, for she was a Predacon and he is an Elite Guard. That's right folks, I am talking about TFA Jetfire and Temptation. This is kinda of a sequel to my first RP fanfic about them -> TFA - A Passionate Meeting... *~WARNING: The following TFA Fanfic you are about to read, contains themes of a Sexual Nature~*

~A Passionate Meeting~

During a mission with a muddling start, Jetfire was wandering though the woods, looking for his brother when he heard a strange unfamiliar hissing noise…~
He looked around, wondering what kind of animal could have made that noise. Jetfire wasn't an expert on organics so he prayed it wasn't something ferocious…~
Just then, he heard someone or something laughing in a mysterious manner and a huge red cobra appeared before him~! At first, Jetfire thought it was just some giant organic creature but on close inspectio
But I wanted to dive deep into the story behind them and their forbidden love, so please folks, do enjoy~ :D :huggle: There will be more coming soon~ :thumbsup:;) Based off our roleplays in MSN, this will be a tribute to my dearest One-san, ~KaitlinEXE :iconkaitlinexe:~:heart: :hug: and all you JetfirexTemptation fans out there~ :dummy: :tighthug:


Jetfire/Transformers Animated (c) Hasbro/Takara


Temptation (c) =HealerCharm :iconhealercharm: (Me~!)


Art (c) *JazzTheTiger :iconjazzthetiger:~:meow: :highfive:
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BumblebeeYandereGirl Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016  Student Artist
Can you make a madoka magica and tfa crossover please where prowl falls in love with autobot madoka kaname Madoka and Homura Glomp Icon Madoka Surprised Icon Madoka Smile Icon 
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, I don't do requests.
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JamesMayheart Featured By Owner May 29, 2016
Hi Healer Charm, I enjoyed your stories you wrote about Jetfire and Temptation. I was wondering what happen to the  TFA A passionate Meeting story? I went to the link and it said the page you are looking for is not there anymore. Any way thank you for reading this and have a wonderful week. :)
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Bee-Bee-Bot Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you trying to do something like "The Little Mermaid"?
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, it was a bit of inspiration at the time
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=)
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silvafoxx Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
I know I commented on this fic before but after looking over Temptation's bio closer and rereading the fic...I'm a little iffy about Jetfire and Temptation's relationship?

Like how you write it as cute but the little facts like:

But no matter who much Jetfire resists, Temptation will try anything to make him hers and get her coils around him, especially her hypnotic powers...~

Tell a sorta different story? With other fics, you have male characters that brainwash your girl ocs as villains and they must be stopped!!!
...But with Temptation's case of brainwashing Jetfire( because the above quote states that she is doing that and parts in the fic hint at it too) it's played off as not a huge deal? Plus Sentinel looks like a terrible person for trying to stop it. Honestly I would side with him if someone was getting brainwashed.

I know this is all just fic stuff but it seems like...not great writing if you put brainwashed love equaling true love. Or making Temptation forcing her love onto Jetfire as okay. Like it's really creepy when someone does that and seeing it played off as nothing just is off.

And to add onto the references to The Little Mermaid, in that movie, I don't think comparing Jetfire's love to Ariel's love as right considering what happened to Jetfire.

Jetfire seems more in the place of Erik when Erik got controlled by Ursula using Ariel's voice.

I know that you like hypnotism and all that but honestly if you claim guy characters being villains for brainwashing girls, what exactly makes girl characters doing that to guy characters any different? It's still evil and villainous behavior.
It's not okay to do and it would've been better if Temptation realized that it wasn't? If she honestly stopped trying to brainwash him and actually get his love the right way? Love includes putting the one you love before yourself. Temptation forcing her love isn't putting Jetfire first so if she released him from the brainwashing and let him decide fully on his own, that'd be great! It would help her grow as a character.
That would've been good development for her and make her switching sides to good a bit more believable instead of her just turning good because of love she forced and having a kid?
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*DUMPS ALL OF THE GOLD MEDALS I CAN FIND ONTO YOU FOR SUCH AN AWESOME POST*
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I see what you mean about Jetfire and Temptation's relationship, but still she would never have harmed Jetfire in either way because she admired him too much. Besides, if it wasn't for Jetfire taming her in his way, she would have still remained a villian. She's was just misunderstood by others. And referring to that Ed's comment on your page, my OCs are far from being MS's and GS's, a least they're not recolours. I put my imagination into my characters. And you are a good artist too.
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silvafoxx Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
I get what you mean but I don't think her being misunderstood by others excuses brainwashing another?
It explains why she would do that but doesn't excuse it. And to complete the,um, taming Jetfire was doing, she should have stopped using her powers on him. That would have shown her becoming a even better person by putting him first. Honestly since Jetfire was under her control, it seems like it could have been less he's changing her and more of her changing herself?

As for Ed's comment, I still disagree with him on that. He was pretty rude and out of line. :/
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I see. Well, she only used her hypnosis on him once. After that, when they got close she stopped. Jetfire slowly eased out of the hypnosis and she stopped because of him. But see what you mean, she did always put Jetfire first and maybe she did change herself, with just a bit of his help. Indeed. I try my best to make my characters as good as possible, no recolours at all. I appreciate your feedback, I just have bad memories from recent encounters in the past. Bu I'm better than I a.
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ILOVEGECKOS Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Nice chapter, I guess. :meow:

One little suggestion, though. If you were planning on making a series of this later, or something, you might want to make Temptation a bit more timid, maybe, because her and Jetfire only met like 4 months ago.

But I'm glad to see another TFA fan out there! I also have a oc, but she's a mary-sue. XD
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you for your suggestion. I see your point~ :nod: But glad you enjoyed the chapter :D Thanks again and oh you XD
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ILOVEGECKOS Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
It's no problem! ^^

Y'know it's really funny, I also have a Predacon oc too XD Her name is BlackDiamond, and she's shipped with JetStorm. XD
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I see XD That's cool~ ^w^
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ILOVEGECKOS Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Thanks! ^^

Hey, would you have time for a quick roleplay? I'm intrested to see how Temptation would react to seeing another snake. XD
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Ya welcome ^w^ sure if you want
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ILOVEGECKOS Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
Okay. :3 I'll start?

BlackDiamond: *dosing off in a dark cave* ...Zzz-

JetFire: Can't catch me! *zooms by the snake cave, laughing*

JetStorm: I is betting I can, brother! *smirks, and flies after him*
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Sure :D

Temptation: Hmmm? UwO *sees them zooming* Aahhh...my fire boy awaitssss...~ *she slithered out to catch Jetfire*
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^_^<3 love this
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Thankies~ :D
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wow ^_^
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Hehehe ^w^ glad u like
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Hotshotsgirl101 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Oooooooooh!!! Jetfire's in twuble!!!
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed~ >w<
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... Wha's wit' da look?
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Jess4ever Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
my little mermaid???? OMG I MEANT THE LITTLE MERMAIN NOT MY LITTLE MERMAID!!!

My Little pony....brainwashed me XD
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lolz, that's oki~ >w<
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Jess4ever Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
I sense my little mermaid in this XDDDDDDD!!!!! AWSOME!
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X'DDD Thankies >w<
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Xvostichka Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Wow, nice fic, Hope, you'll continue it :3 Btw, I'd like to translate it... Of course, with your permission ^_^
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you very much~ :D :hug: Ooh yes, go right ahead~ ;) <3
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Xvostichka Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Nyan~ Thanks ^_^
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ya welcome ;3
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No no no, I was in a bit of a bad mood when I wrote my reply, so it's not your fault. I know you're only trying to help. I just wanted to write the TFA world in my eyes. Jetfire and Temptation have known each other much longer, but they won't be bonded for a while. But again, I' sorry too.
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ArtistDeidra Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
Okay. Glad I could help.
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
By the way, Temptation is not that old, she's about 25/27 and Jetfire could be 18 in human years.
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ArtistDeidra Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
Behavior wise, the jet twins seem pretty inmature so I just guessed 15-17.
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh I see, 17 seems good to me~
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ArtistDeidra Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Okay.
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HealerCharm Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll try and improve on my next chapter. I didn't mean what I said on my other reply. It's fine to critique, even if I didn't ask for it but no worries~ :hug:
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Thanks.
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ya welcome :3
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awesome1 and i saw that lil mermaid part there, AWESOME ^^
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Hehehe, thankies so much~ :D <3
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